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  • Found this poem I wrote when I was a teenager. What do you think?

    A fragile flower, quivering bloom

    Beauty most perfected

    Quivering in a fragile wind

    God's own hand selected

    A fragile heart, beating life

    Flowing through the being

    Beating love to warming arms

    Quickening to those seeing

    A fading flower, withering bloom

    Dying with the season

    Withering in a winter's cold

    God's own wisest reason

    A fading heart, faltering life

    Seeping out, forever bleeding

    Faltering love to indifferent arms

    Turning from the needing

    I think I wrote this after one of those ghastly teenage heartbreaks. Don't it make you cringe!

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