http://homepage.ntlworld.com/ronandrose/net/poems.html Just let me know what you think, i'm 17 btw :)

Yeah, I can tell your 17. Improvement needed. Mundane Expressions is possibly the worst due to its incessant need to rhyme.

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Astano

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Astano asked in Arts & Humanities Poetry · 1 decade ago

Please rate my poems!?

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/ronandrose/net/poems....

Just let me know what you think, i'm 17 btw :)

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Andy
1 decade ago
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Yeah, I can tell your 17. Improvement needed. Mundane Expressions is possibly the worst due to its incessant need to rhyme.
Anonymous
1 decade ago
awh wow there really good
( :
answer mine?
http://uk.answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Ak...

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