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What do you think of this poem?
It's unfinished and it's just a quick thing. I'm not a poet by any means.
Keep all wishful thinking in a large wooden box
To remain forever, each tick of the clock
For the thoughts in my mind are those of a fool
Defying realities, breaking unbroken rules
To search the high heavens, to figure it out
The past and the present, my future filled with doubt
My heart is now heavy, has sunk in my chest
All my pain I have hidden, now that you are at rest
All my wishful thinking contained in the box
Will stay there forever, no key for the lock
It's not supposed to be exciting. It was supposed to be about anguish and hiding any weaknesses away from other people.
5 Answers
- Anonymous9 years agoFavourite answer
Finish it up and show us the final poem, don't look for any direction before that so we can see what you really mean
It's off to a good start
- Anonymous9 years ago
Awesome!! You're amazing. btw. You ARE a poet. People who write poems are poets. :)
- Anonymous9 years ago
BORING!!!
