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Goop's asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Any comments welcome?

Can you believe your eyes "

I thought I saw a Tiger,

Perhaps it was a cat,

And then a pteradactyl,

Well it might have been a bat.

Then I saw a dragon,

I saw it in the park,

It turned into a fallen tree,

When it wasn't dark.

All these scary animals,

And lion ,Wolf and Bear,

But when I look a second time,

They're never really there.

I wonder what's outside my door,

Should I go and have a peep,

Or pull the covers up some more,

It's time to go to sleep.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    HA! It's all Goopy! Well done! TD

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    'It sounds like a children's poem. If you can compose more poems like this, then you can actually have them revised and published. It's apparent that you have talent, but that talent needs to he cultivated. You can't let something like that go to waist. And I suggest that you start a blog. Otherwise, other people can steal your work from here, and publish it as their own. It have been known to happen. Well, best of luck to you.

  • 1 decade ago

    Ideal for a childrens book

  • 1 decade ago

    very gd i like it and u get a star too xxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 1 decade ago

    brilliant! if you have any more have you thought about starting a blog and putting them on their. You obviously have talent.

  • 1 decade ago

    Nice, that could be a really good children's poem!

  • 1 decade ago

    its like some thing you would read on the wall of a latrine, but cleaner!youbnshould call it 'Bleach in my peach'

    Source(s): andrew Lloyd weber
  • 1 decade ago

    I like it, its very good.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    if i had kids, i'd read that to them b4 bed. very nice

  • 1 decade ago

    very nice

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