Do you see Trees the way I do?

Hi Peter , I Loved it especially the part that u wrote about pine tree .. it's a wisdom what did you say that devil makes things in our eyes beautiful to approache even if it's forbidden and if we approached we will be in pain ... It's really awesome of you to express it with that way :)

Keep going :)))))

This is an interesting sequence of ideas, written in a compelling way.

I'm not 100% certain that you can convincingly equate the pine tree with the devil, as that particular tree has many other connotations in mythology and literature.

If you don't mind one or two suggestions (made with the best of motives) I would aim for some regularity in the metre. The number of syllables in each line varies considerably, without any obvious reason for the variation. And there seems to be no reason for the near-rhyme of "falter" (unless the willow's name is "Walter").

Also, the grammar of "churches praising song" is unclear. Is "praising" a an adjective or a verb? If a verb, doesn't it need "with" before "song"?

I would suggest that you have the sketch of a fine poem here. To perfect it, some work needs to be done.

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I liked your poem. I thought a professional writer had written until you told us you wrote it in just 30 minutes. I like trees especially the oak. It's big around and tall and blocks the wind. It's very windy where I live.

I liked an analogy of all three trees.

Good job!!!

Loved it, it would be great to be able to aks the trees on what they have seen and heard over the years. Glad to hear from you been awhile, Babs.♥♥♥♥

Hello Pete it's been a while how are you??

I really liked this one I have a feeling what it's about and I think you do too but don't feel I can write my theories here but what I will say is, I think you are finally making peace with it all. xx

It is a beautiful poem, it come from the heart as it should be, it is a way getting your feelings across.

Not a bad poem

I quite liked that. Too many question marks, though.

i like it not sure if you wrote it but i really like it :D