Do you ever feel like me?

Ah you've done it again! This poem is as funny as your trees one! I especially loved the "I would compare you to a summer breeze, that starts at my head and ends around my knees" (wow.) and "and place it in a book and when I feel so lonely, I'd open you up just to take a look" (seriously I wasn't expecting the sudden innuendo there).

The rest is just filler, badly rhyming filler at that-have you considered doing free-verse instead?

You mention in the additional details section that you don't read other poetry, (or something along those lines.) Start. Then you'll know how to write poetry well.

soreness is a wierd element. Burning a finger or stubbing a toe can harm all night, yet when I shattered my wrist into 20 products (bones protruding), i did no longer sense something in any respect. i assume i replaced into merely into "operation mode," and that i found out that soreness could be a incapacity in getting mandatory scientific help. i do no longer think of the worst actual soreness can come on the brink of the psychological suffering many human beings have suffered. Merry Christmas, and each and all of the perfect to you and your loved ones. And be careful!

Great poem. I like the way you said "If I could compare you I would compare you to---- Because you can't really compare people with nature but nature is beautiful.

Good Job!!!!

Thank you Peter, you made my day better with your lovely poem. A tear fell and a smile came to my face. Your Friend♥♥♥♥

Sorry but this kept going through my head as I read yours.

Admitted it is not the same but the flavour..

just change the word "compare" to "remind" or something.

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?

Thou art more lovely and more temperate.

Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,

And summer's lease hath all too short a date.

Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,

And often is his gold complexion dimmed;

And every fair from fair sometime declines,

By chance, or nature's changing course untrimmed.

But thy eternal summer shall not fade

Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st;

Nor shall death brag thou wand'rest in his shade,

When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st,

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,

So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.

I really like this poem. good Job you put alot of feeling into the poem

first few lines sound like shakesphere's poem

Shall i compare thee to a summer's Day?

If you wrote it yourself then you deserve praise from me, but if you copied it somewhere, could you tell me the name of the real author? xD

Aaaaaahhhhhh. You big softie that is sooooo lovely.x

So good. I love your poem.