my poem here its goes?

That is soo good! You could use commas every 5 sylables which will slow the whole thing down which gives you time to imagine it as calm and tranquil ;)

Edit: And you could replace the and with a comma which will make it one whole flow instead of breaking up the sentence.

It's great!

Wow nice poem, R.I.P Niz sorry you had to lose her!

I have a 14.2hh bay Standardbred 6yr old mare named Poppy. She is gorgeous and really cute! I have a really good bond with her and when i got her she didn't know how to do very much but i have trained her and now she is jumping 60cm and hopefully one day 1m 20.

awwwwwwwwww thats REALLY good you must have been really close to her! i sorry for your loss i like the poem i wish that i could write like that the only thing i would change is when you say

"with her 4 white sox and a large white blaze" i would change it to

with her 4 white sox's and a large white blaze because if you are saying she had 4 white sox's you would make it plural

but other than that GREAT

i have a AQH named cider he is 12 and is a dark brown with a medium white blaze he is a really sweet boy!

This poem is really amazing, much better than I could do haha! I think you should capitalize the beginning of each line, and change 4 to the actual word four. But yeah, it was really good!

Awwwwww:$,i like it it is amazing

R.I.P mandi's niz♥(horse)

sorry for ur lost:)

you poem is,wow i am speechless really!

nice! it's sweet. my breed of horse is a Walkaloosa. she is grey with white spots from her whithers to her bottom!

Happy Trails!